Fill
in the circle completely.
Don’t make any marks outside the box.
Use only a No.
2 pencil.
If you went through the American public school system after
the dual rise of the standardized test and the Scantron form—as I did—then instructions
like those above probably sound very familiar. I’ve always hoped that no kid
ever had the makings of a masterpiece in a standardized essay response—for all
we know, a brilliant re-examination of the reasons for the War of 1812 has been
lost forever, because to write it would have been to mark outside the box.
This, of course, qualifies as an especially extreme example of
artificially restrictive boundaries, and even this has its benefits. For one, the
many, nameless readers of the thousands of responses to the same generic essay
prompt probably appreciate not having to read any more than is necessary. But
even when constructed from some perceived need, both literal and metaphorical
boundaries to writing can have pervasive consequences. I see this firsthand
teaching introductory composition classes here at the university. I’ve
constructed assignments that are open by design; especially when it comes to
topic choice, the lion’s share of the intellectual work is left up to the
student. Some of them thrive, developing interesting and unusual avenues to
explore; more often, though, the freedom makes them uncomfortable. Even brainstorming
seems to be to be constrained by the mental version of rusty pipes—once you
open the tap, it takes a while for things to really get going. And why wouldn’t
it? The most ruthlessly efficient way teach writing is with a formula: three
supported points equals a conclusion. After twelve years of that, I can’t blame
them for looking like deer in the headlights when I introduce them to the concept
of a lyric essay or a non-linear argument.
What really resonated with me in Matt Kirschenbuam’s Mechanisms is the same wrestling with boundaries,
this time located in new media. He’s constantly evaluating, and then
questioning, the barriers that have been established that separate traditional
textual studies from digital media analysis, with some fascinating results.
Early on, he quotes from a 1991 book by George Landow and Pauel Delany:
So long as the text was married
to a physical media, readers and writers took for granted three crucial
attributes: that the text was linear,
bounded, and fixed. Generations
of scholars and authors internalized these qualities as the rules of thought,
and they have pervasive social consequences. We can define Hypertext as the use of the computer to transcend the linear,
bounded, and fixed qualities of the traditional written text. (42)
To take this view, it’s no longer just the box for the
standardized test essay, but the whole expanse of print literature before it
that leads to internalized boundaries. Here, new media is the liberator, the
breaker of pre-established roles. And in some ways, for some situations, this
is true. (I keep trying to imagine how one might translate the “write lines on
the chalkboard” punishment into the 21st century. With CTRL+C, after
all, to reproduce a line of text is the work of seconds, not hours.)
But if it was really that simple, if the seemingly
ever-expandable Microsoft Word document was all that we needed to reformulate
our relationship with text, then my students should already be free. They, even
more than me, should have the free and flexible relationship with digitally
recorded words that continues to be propagated—electronic composition is
flexible! It’s changeable! The freedom is exhilarating, right?
Right.
Except…
Except when it’s not; except when changeability doesn’t mean
transparency, or removability. One of my favorite recurring images in Mechanisms is that of the computer as a ‘black
box,’ that seemingly impenetrable record of what has been. The book also spends
quite a bit of time with the mechanics of a bitstream; these both add up to the
same idea, which is this: like picking up glitter spilled from an elementary
school craft table or the removing the smell of sauerkraut from a poorly-ventilated
kitchen, removing the traces of computer activity is no small feat. To bring in
another, more elegant image of digital resonance, this time from the text
itself:
The interactions of modern productivity
software and mature physical storage media such as a hard drive may finally
resemble something like a quantum pinball machine…files leaving persistent
versions of themselves behind at every point they touch—like afterimages that
only gradually fade—and the persistent versions themselves creating versions
that multiply in like manner through the system. (52)
At some point, our record-keeping became self-perpetuating. This, too, is something that my students
know better than almost anyone. Try arguing the impermanence of the internet to
someone being chased by an embarrassing photo. We haven’t done away with media
boundaries at all; if anything, we’ve just suppressed them into the
gears-and-guts layer of the composition apparatus so we don’t have to look at
them anymore.
A composition notebook only has so many pages; a terabyte of
memory, though it seems vast, only has room for so many bytes. I keep wondering:
will we even know what to do with uncapped storage when we finally get it?
Laura, I really enjoyed how your related the boundaries of new media with your experiences teaching composition. I think you are right when you point out that if new media were really completely revolutionary and transformative then writers would already "be free." I am constantly struck by the fact that even though most of my students maintain a social media presence (and thus engage in public writing) they are absolutely terrified of sharing their writing with their peers. I wonder though in what ways and to what extent new media has changed the way that our students compose? I also wonder about the implications of a medium with hidden restrictions and limitations. It seems like Kirschenbaum treats the fact that computers obscure their own imperfections and limits as insidious. I wonder if this goes back to some of the readings from earlier this semester. If we assume that new technologies have liberated us from the confines of print, then I guess we run the risk of becoming complacent and lose the desire to critically examine digital media.
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